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:iconbulgolgi:
:icondonotplz::iconmyartplz:
Some of you wanted to read the story that I have written. So here are the first four pages of the story. I hope I don't disappoint you too much :I

Oh, just in case sooooooome of you might miss my dry humour, I titled this story as "Story of a Child" because Child is Oliver's last name.

Oliver Child,
Story of a Child.
See? Humour.

The story was written by me.
All the characters mentioned in the story belongs to me.
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~ChangingMeeble Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awsome story ... i want to read more xD
Congrats on getting to the top page ;u;
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:iconbulgolgi:
Wait whaaat? thank you so much ; u;
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*hae-ri Nov 19, 2012  Student Photographer
I've always fancied your way with words.
also Curtis, why are you such a bad boy /slaps
no I kid I love him

okay

now gimme more

OKAY
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:iconbulgolgi:
AWWW you, thank you so much buddy ; u;

PSHHHHHSHH Curtis is only childish/irritating to the people he is willing to become friends to or people he cares.

Curtis: DAMN STRAIGHT

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*hae-ri Nov 23, 2012  Student Photographer
BAW. Curtis you adorkable dude. You know
adorable
like a dork
who is adorable
yes

I like him.
NOW GIMME MORE
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!TheKirinLegacy Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The title totally confused me until i got up to the point where you said Marie was 15. I thought they were like 10 or something o-o;
Otherwise, I think your writing is narrative and very light, wich is good, but it lacks a bit of fluidity. Otherwise, despite the frequent repetitions, I guess it is fun to read. :D
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:iconstarobots:
I don't think she was really asking for your critique, considering English is her second language. Not to mention this was posted largely at the request of followers who wanted to read it, so I don't really understand why you felt the need to jump in and analyze it, then try to pass off an insult as a compliment. :/
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!TheKirinLegacy Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What insult? I insulted no one here. I'm sorry if you perceived it wrong, it was in positive means.
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:iconstarobots:
"Otherwise, despite the frequent repetitions, I guess it is fun to read."

Unless you're going to tell me that you don't speak English very well, in which case I find your original comment even more ridiculous and uncalled for.
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!TheKirinLegacy Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry, I meant no bad by this sentence, end of argument.
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